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This took quite a while to flesh out, because it starts to get hard to find ways to describe Rae after each stage in her transformation. Tried out a few different writing techniques here, hopefully they don't make me sound like too much of a fanatic. :P
Anyways, I really enjoyed adding to this thread, and this is probably one of my favorite episodes that I have written yet. Already planning on continuing SGR in a few other places because of how fun this thread is.