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More of this, please!
I concur with Anon 1. Moar Pls!
This seems like the kind of tale I could get into!
I appreciate the attention for you guys!
I'm writing a follow up as I type this comment, but I'm also interested in what you want to see in a follow up?
Are you more interested in the mystery of the house, or are you just in excited anticipation about these 'bros' accepting their feminine side.
The mystery and setting and camaraderie between the bros really builds the atmosphere that makes one very much anticipate the changes. So as frustrating as it be to hear as a writer...I like both?
I'd prefer the latter over the former, but both really are appealing.
I agree with the above anon, but if they become entrapped one by one or two by two there may be a way to balance the two without front-loading one or the other.
Thanks so much for the comments guys! Really makes writing all the more fun to start.
That being said, I know the first episode can tease many things, so I really hope this latest episode kept up the mystery and theme.
And don't worry, the 'feminization' will begin real soon! I just want to streeeeetch out the finale as long as possible before things get crazy.
Because I'm a dork, I actually checked whether there was a town in Washington by that name. (It turns out there are places called Trafford in Manchester(UK), Alabama, and Pennsylvania though.) It sounds to me like it would be somewhere near the western end of the Straight of Juan de Fuca, or possibly some jerkwater in west Jefferson County.
Not that this matters in the least, but it's the kind of thing that interests me as a Washingtonian. Considering what it is we do here, it's probably for the best that it's not a real place.
Yes, I'm aware of what you pointed out, as I try to make all small towns fictional, just because they're more fun to invent then restricting one self.
Frankly, I was looking for a place called 'Trapford', but when I thought that was a little too on the nose, I looked for a place with a close-ish name to that, and found the perfect place name!
That being said, if you want an unsubtle naming convention, I'd suggest looking at their High School name! :P
Thanks for the comment, fun to read