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Crazy Diamond
Wed Sep 26 17:46:04 2018

Nice I was going to write up the third or fourth option from the previous episode but this good too.


Now to right a worthy continuation.



Wed Sep 26 17:57:33 2018

Wait, classes? Aren't they already ninjas at this point?


Brickware
Wed Sep 26 18:38:54 2018

Thanks I had an idea for most of the options just finally was able to pick and write out this one. Hope I didn't disrupt whatever story you had going Crazy.

As for them being ninjas already they are and that is what I went with though it wasn't specified when the D20 was found. I guess I did not make it clear enough even with 'years of snacking while studying'.

To that end Adama could you add this 'In fact her lack of stamina and strength almost became an issue until Ino pushed herself to meet the minimum physical requirements while acing everything else. And through the years continued to keep herself in acceptable shape to progress as a ninja so that she would continue to have access the subject she loved to learn more about.' between the two large middle paragraphs.


Crazy Diamond
Wed Sep 26 19:14:19 2018

Brickware, This line implies they haven't become ninja yet

In fact Ino now was doing so well in her classes the instructors had considered having her graduate early but didn't as Ino was actually lacking in one important area, physical ability.


For future reference I set this thread and most of my Naruto threads post time skip in the Shippueden era so everyone is at least a teenager since in part one everyone would be a [censored] and that would be creepy.


BTW Brickware, what were your ideas for the other options for the previous episode?



Wed Sep 26 20:07:32 2018

What confused me was the use of "now" here:

In fact Ino now was doing so well in her classes the instructors had considered having her graduate early but didn't as Ino was actually lacking in one important area, physical ability.


Adama
Wed Sep 26 20:36:29 2018

Added the line.


Brickware
Wed Sep 26 20:43:14 2018

Darn thought that would have cleared it up. That is what I thought as I do not like changing young characters.

Adama could you please ignore my early comment about changes and instead change: In fact Ino now was doing so well in her classes the instructors had considered having her graduate early but didn't as Ino was actually lacking in one important area, physical ability.

To: In fact Ino had done so well back in her years in the Academy the instructors had considered having her graduate early but did not as she was actually lacking in one important area, physical ability. Which almost cost Ino her graduation before she managed to improve her scores in those areas enough to meet the minimum requirements.

And please change: her friend and fellow ninja before she began to change.

To: her friend and fellow chunin before she began to change.


Crazy my ideas for the other options were:

2) Brain drain effect that leaves Sakura an airhead or bimbo and Sakura in a moment of jealousy using a wish to make herself more curvy.

3) For the IQ swap was thinking of having them not really notice much of a difference but they argue about Ino's wish and the genie's interpretation of the wish leading to Sakura and/or Ino both making wishes that change the other. Hadn't been able to think of what those wishes would have been though.

4) Retroactively gives Ino an Edietic Memory so she is called a genius as she learns everything very quickly. However she develops a perverted bisexual side as she clearly remembers every man, woman or body parts, like breasts, ass, etc., she's ever found attractive.

5) Makes Sakura lazy who is still smart but only applies herself when she has to while preferring to eat, sleep, fuck or anything else that makes her feel good but doesn't take much effort.


Brickware
Wed Sep 26 20:44:21 2018

Sorry Adama I took too long writing the previous comment. And sorry for making this extra work for you.


Adama
Wed Sep 26 21:04:11 2018

Okay, took out the previous change and made the new changes.


Crazy Diamond
Wed Sep 26 21:10:17 2018

Cool ideas Brickware.


I should have a continuation for this episode tonight and I'm taking option 2.


Brickware
Wed Sep 26 21:26:08 2018

Thank you Adama