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I agree with the commenters in the previous ep. Your writing is great, and I'd love to see more!
I think this concentrates real well the fun of the earlier episodes while keeping well the erotic-theming of it all (constant expansion, omni)
I feel we may have to wait a little bit for the third part, but hot damn am I having fun reading each episode!
May more people read this great stuff!