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So I'm not going to pretend that I didn't get a sneak peek of this bad boy and gave my opinion on good options before this posted (Damn, look at those sexy options eh?)
However, what I still want to emphasize here is how much I need to learn from nick369 ability to capture human motion in word. I really hope to come back to this episode a few times to really put the joy I had reading her body's movement into my work, as it really is fantastic.
I hardly say this (as it kind of is cliche in writing compliments) but goodness I really do See her body in its 'Mary-Sue' glory here, almost like it's a picture. Plus, it's juxtaposed perfectly with Cameron's reaction too, creating a really entertaining read!
Fantastic job, and I hope other writers on this site take note!