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Adama, I have a handful of errors and I’m really sorry to even asking you to correct, if so thanks, while you cussing me out.
1th paragraph “like biker” TOO: “like bikers”
2th paragraph “have two” TOO: “have those two”
5th paragraph “to hear” TOO: “to clear his trouble mind”
9th paragraph “to door” TOO: “the DAMN door”
11th paragraph “were” TOO: “wear”
12th paragraph “How do you know how I wearing, without the window shades shut closed, huh, huh?”
13th paragraph “Miranda told how” TOO: “Miranda told him in how”
14th paragraph “just worthless” TOO: “just THIS worthless”
And if you would’ve found more errors, just shot me! Thanks
Mostly fixed, but you didn't say what you wanted changed in the 12th paragraph. There are a couple things wrong with that sentence.
Sorry about that Adama, so you can shot me now!
“How do you know how I wearing, without the window shades shut closed, huh, huh?”
TOO: “How did you know in what I was wearing, with the window shades shut close, huh, huh?” of the 12th paragraph. Thanks
Fixed.
Adama can you please change this two errors
6th paragraph change "brock" to "brick"
And change "roof" to "bathrobe" in the 3rd paragraph from the bottom. Thanks.
Fixed.