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iAmMelting
Sun Oct 16 08:31:07 2011

Author notes: I attempted to get travel times and train info as accurate as possible to fit the setting, but if I have left any glaring errors I apologize in advance.

I have attempted to craft this in such a way that it can be read as either a dark sex tale, or as a waffy maybe lime-ish dream sequence. How this story gets continued will depend on the choices of other authors if any.

A discerning reader will notice that this 'lemon' experience is a product of the mind rather than a hard fact. I wanted to attempt my hand at producing a lemon in which at the same time a person who wanted the darker material may easily picture it in their minds, while someone who dislikes such abuse may write those aspects away.

Honestly, I believe I did not quite tame it down enough to fully allow plausible deniability, but I am too tired tonight to edit further, and my life has become too busy for future editing time becoming available. As such I release it to you all as is. Do with it what you