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Nice episode. The story really seems to be moving somewhere. What I would like to see would be for Luna to come back alive. The skin she was wearing was an Horcruxe. So according to Harry Potter Canon she could very well be alive. What do you think.
I really like the whole idea and the episodes are nice. I just hope that the story won't go completely dark and that Harry somehow manages to stop Bellatrix.
Luna alive? Unlikely, but possible. She wasn't hit with a killing curse, so it is not the same situation as when Voldemort's Horcrux 'took the bullet' for Harry. That would require some explanation how she survived bodily.
I have some ideas, but I doubt they go in the same directions as your hopes, novum.
As for going completely dark? I actually try to give Fleur/Harry an out in some episodes. Take a look at the directions, there are plenty of holes to exploit right then and there.
Of course that still requires someone to write these episodes.
Great work! Hope to see more!