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This was fantastic, though missed opportunity for a Pryde pun in the title. Great work.
Adama, can you please help with this:
Her blonde hair was collected into two long pigtails...
Please just add the word 'braided' in front of 'pigtails'.
Her blonde hair was collected into two long braided pigtails...
Adama, can you please help me with this:
Then those images were replaced by X-Men, Avengers, Fantastic Four and other superheroes helping society, battling supervillains and protecting the week.
Just replace 'week' with 'weak'.
Thank you Mad Max.
I feel honored to receive praise from such great BEA writer as yourself.
And I always enjoy reading your superheroic BEA work.
Fixed.
You are growing to be a formidable writer, my friend.