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In the paragraph where Penny talks to a boy for the first time, I seem to have left out the part where she actually asked him to be her boyfriend, despite what Alex says a few paragraphs later. Could you change it to what's written below?
"Hi there", she chirped. "My name's Penny. What's your name? What kind of music you like? I love music. We should totally be boyfriend and girlfriend. Where do you think we should date? How about— Where are you going?"
Fixed, sorry for the delay.
Has anyone made a "Benny Hill" joke yet?