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Oh, come on. God damn it.
Huh, weird, maybe because I uploaded this from my phone it didn't put the paragraph breaks in correctly. Adama is there any chance you could correct that? Please and thank you.
Your paragraphs were single-spaced instead of the usual double-spaced. I added the extra blank lines for you.
Bio, you really did not put much thought into this one, did you?
If you don't think it's good enough, sorry... I just felt guilty since I kept saying I'd do one and even if you'd do one I wanted to give one my shot and, yeah, this is what I came up with. Sorry.
Well, it just seems like you threw this together in a panic over a coffee break. In any case, I've written up my thoughts in the version of another episode. I'll probably finish it up shortly and upload it, although I'm going to try and get Lumitiel's opinion on Kanako's fate because I've just never been able to reach a decision there.
My opinion? I don't mind it too much: Kanako always struck me as the kind of character who needed something of a hit to her pride. On the other hand I personally had intended for her to turn the tables.
If I were to continue from this thread, Makoto would have also accidentally entered something... But it would be accidentally beneficial to her, possibly giving her some level of authority over Witchbot.
BioYuGi, whenever you get a chance, I sent you a message over DeviantArt.
And Lumitiel, I was thinking of employing a sillier option, as my episode has Motoko entering and sending the command without fully realizing what's happening.
What do you think of these possibilities?
1. Fangirl/Stalker
2. Pimp/Business Agent
3. Lover
4. Rival
5. Maid
6. Opposite
Just so you know, I also have a deviantart account. I just don't use it for anything but following certain artists. It's the same username I have here.
Anyway! Those all seem like options with a lot of potential. Not entirely sure why Motoko would enter any of them except to be silly, but then again everyone typing at it is compelled to add a silly command.
If you wanted me to pick a favourite though, it would probably be "rival".
That's basically exactly it. Motoko sees the unfinished command, and Motoko enters something strange and silly, it seemed appropriate to nod towards the original command, which is still very much in effect.
And I've added you on DeviantArt, maybe I'll send you a message there once I've cracked out the other half of this.