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Haha I suck at being consistent.
Anyways, this is the episode that I had half-finished forever ago and just today was able to get all-the-way-finished to upload it. Sorry for leading you on Mira, and I hope you enjoy!
Still into where this one is going, so give me some feedback where ya'll want me to take it if people are still reading this!
Whoops, got them mixed up. Hey Adama, could you change left to right in the line "a silky wave that fell down around their two left arms."?
Also, could you make it Moira's not Moira in "Hair was an obsession of Moira since her youth"?
Finally, could you change humanly to inhumanly in "The feeling of an humanly impossible amount"?
I guess two proofreads weren't enough!
A quintessential episode which captures your oeuvre.
Nicely done!
But seriously, you know me and world building, so the most titillating detail in this episode was the cottage industry they have developed from their 'hobby'. Such a simple idea which I haven't seen combined with 'increased output' fetish. Simple but effective. Well done.
Thanks for the compliments, friend.
Always love to hear from you buddy, don't hesitate to drop me a line if you feel like chatting :)
I enjoyed this despite not being into multi-boob/head and indifferent on multi-arm.
(That's meant as a compliment, though I realize it may have got lost a little.)
No, I totally understand the sentiment and I appreciate you taking the time to let me know!
I haven't figured out what suggestions to make yet but I did want to let you know that I have read this, and while it's not what I was expecting, I'm more then excited with what you did with it. The four arms and breasts are very very welcome and all the comments and descriptions you made on how their minds work now was awesome. I greatly enjoyed reading this. I even really liked their newly expanded locks, not a huge fan for shaved heads but I loved it none the less.
Fixed.
Not sure "inhumanly impossible amount" is right. Normally you'd say either "humanly impossible amount" or "inhuman amount". I suppose it's correct if you mean it's not only impossible for humans, it's even impossible for nonhumans. ;-)
Wow, no you're right Adama. Ugh, when I re-read it on the site my eyes must have glazed over or something because it stopped making sense how I had it the first time. The other two were definite errors that I made but the last one was me being wrong about being wrong haha. Could you switch it back for me, sorry to keep bugging you :)
Also, I'm glad you enjoyed it Mira. I realize that not a lot of people are into stories about conjoinment and multiple limbs and the like, so you're one of the people I wrote it for (besides myself first and foremost). So thanks for the kind words.
To be more specific "a humanly impossible" I believe is the proper English. I think I originally had it as "an humanly impossible" which might have tripped me up to begin with. I appreciate you switching it, despite it being wrong though!
Fixed back.
You're very welcome. I'll be showing my girlfriend and the others I know that are into these topics tonight or tomorrow. Do you happen to use Discord?
I'm starting to use it a bit infrequently under this pseudonym. So I guess the answer is yes. My tag is Dissonant#1848 if you'd like to reach me there. I check it much more rarely than my email, however, just as a heads up.
Alright, I added you, also still have your email from last time. Speaking of Discord though. Adama you gotta accept that friend request. Since you left the old chat I can't message you without the friend.
Sorry 'bout that. I stopped keeping up with the FB discord, so I stopped logging into Discord altogether.