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If your going to write a fan fic go do it on ff.net
Where the hells the fun? Or the be? Or anything!
There is no rule requiring every episode to appeal to you personally.
I'm happy that someone has taken up the task of adding to this story (even if the original option was hijacked to be this branch). Keep up the fun!
Nah this is great, cant wait to see more. Keep it coming!