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Mr. Filler
Sun Mar 1 07:43:47 2020

I hope things will clear up completely when I write the first follow up to this new road, but I did want to fire this out on the first of March!

One thing I couldn't note in the text though is that I hope to heighten the pace here compared to Richmann road. Simply more things will be happening with less of a focus on savouring each slow thought, and more enjoying the snowballing chaos which can happen in a 'sexy outbreak'.

Expect a lot of jumping perspectives as things get lewder and lewder until everything is flipped upside down!

Let me know if there are any confusions though as this concept changed quite a bit over the last few days, and if you readers have any suggestions, I'll be interested in hearing!

Enjoy!


Tomsketchit
Sun Mar 1 16:37:56 2020

I like this idea a lot! Your descriptive writing is on point as usual, lots of good humor and such in there. It's interesting to see how the idea changed from what we discussed, but I do think this works a bit better.



Sun Mar 1 23:48:11 2020

Good setup, this definitely feels a lot different from Richmann Road, where the transformations were a lot more 'magical' and individual. I'll be waiting until after the first follow up before suggestions though, to better see how things work. Looking forward to it.