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churl
Wed Mar 4 11:04:56 2020

Trying to stay away from the geometric doubling implied by Mark's power. Very soon we get into "more than the mass of the earth" territory


GMJ
Wed Mar 4 12:23:12 2020

Yeah, geometric population growth is hard to make interesting after the first couple of “generations.” We can probably just assume the duplication was a once-off event caused by her drinking three orange sodas in quick succession, and that any charge she generates subsequently will just make her float and glow and maybe make her sexier or something.

Speaking of options, I was really hoping this option would be the next one taken! Miguel is the smallest girl here, and could do with a boost.

Oh, and if it wasn’t obvious, I decided to play the compulsion-to-obey thing as the girls becoming so sexy that their requests are hard (but not actually impossible) to resist - and that the spell breaks if they or the people obeying them get distracted. The idea is to make it possible for them to abuse their power, but also not impossible to oppose... Though I imagine other authors might interpret things differently.

Oh, and I forgot to mention this, but it’s a pleasure to be writing with you again, Churl.


churl
Wed Mar 4 21:11:39 2020

The pleasure is all mine!

Yeah, I see the "mind control" power as being more like powerful pheromones. Enough to get those nearby hot and bothered and eager to please the queen, but able to shake it off if they put their mind to it