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I think you lost part of the ep:
Unbeknowest to Ami, Saeko had been told to go easy on her. This
after the word 'this' it just drops down to a new paragraph.
Yeah, that was an accidental typo that I didn't catch in time. Sorry.
Tell me what's supposed to be there and I'll fix it.
@Adama
This is the sentence that should've been there.
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Unbeknowest to Ami, Saeko had been told to go easy on her, since it wouldn't do for the Minion to truly harm her master. This semi-intense battle continued for a few minutes, with Saeko tearing up much of the room and Mercury trying to stun her.
Fixed. I also changed "Unbeknowest" to "Unbeknownst", since that's the right spelling.
Working on the next piece, and was wondering if you wanted to go into email correspondance to better co-ordinate the direction of the story.
Send an email to lumitiel'at'gmail'dot'com if you are interested.