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Just happened to find this. Excellent chapter. Re: the next chapter, I'm for following what goes on with Ataru, Benten and Oyuki (I do not believe there has ever been written an UY fanfic that had a threesome involving them), followed by the scene with Lum and Shinobu. I'm certainly curious to know what the Oni girl has in store for her, lol.
I've been loose drafting a few ideas for the beginning of the Lum Shinobu followup, I'm contemplating an element where one of the pieces of Shinobu's outfit is a pair of gloves with a built in Tickle Ray, the use of which of course lets Lum call out Shinobu for breaking the "No wierd alien stuff" rule.
As for the Oyuki, Benten, Ataru threesome, one element I have brought up in a few comments is that one aspect of the revised characterisation is to consider what sort of prefferences everyone's got as far as sex goes. My thought has been that Ataru's especially likes actively making his partners feel good, Benten likes everything but especially loves the times she either has total control or has no control, and Oyuki's main fetish is role playing, especially where she can encourage her partner while maintianing a show of propriety.
Still contemplating the best way to have all that gel.