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Let it be known that the person pacing at the very first word is Saul.. not a random character named P or something... :P
Damn I got to get better and rereading my work before pressing enter. I mean I literally missed the first letter!
Fixed!
Hugs!
I am very impressed by the amount of updates to this storyline you have built. Seriously, there is not many authors who can consistently write so many updates in such a short time.
So no Problem if there are Little mistakes here and there. Do you use a spellcheck program? Maybe it would help.
I am really happy that I came up with this Thing of power though, given what it has been used for^^
Aw thanks HC. Always great to see some appreciation in the comment section. When I was looking for things of power, which lets not kid ourselves, most are... just either the same thing repeated or very limited in their story possibilities, Bottle of Porn Logic seemed to fit my idea of a reality altering object which was rather uncontrollable. I like the idea of someone's TRUE desires being the problem, not just a faulty issue with the object.
That being said though, the updates at first made sense simply because when I start a new thread on the addventure I like to cast a wide-net and fill all the options I can and see if any catch my attention so I can throw more time into them. But now I just hope the updates are solid episodes which people enjoy reading.
As for the mistakes in my work? Yeah its mostly I type really fast and when I do make a mistake its usually an "they're, there, or their" issue. Spell check doesn't help much in those situation, along with copying and pasting issues. Nevertheless, I am excited to post things when I am done, so as long as no one is too upset with the minute problems found when they should be focusing more on the big picture. Anyone let me know though, if they find a mistake that took them out of the story, that will help!
Any ideas on where you'd like this episode to go HC? I mean it was originally your object right? :D
Haven't followed the storyline closely, though I skimmed over things. I personally liked the whole different personally concept. The SANDWICH personality was quite amusing....
Maybe use that again? I think the current line of the Story is going through a monster-hunt Thing? With perverted parodies of Monsters....
Did the main character drink the entire bottle actually? Or is it still wherether he left it.... I guess that could be a loose end to use if it is still around.
Yeah the bottle is still around somewhere. The problem is when reality warps like it does, the bottle isn't usually planned in the new world, so its plopped in any old random place. That being said, there are probably quite a few sips left in it, and it will be interesting to see if Death has gotten her cold hands on it...
But until Saul drinks that again, the voice is not going to be in his head... Its going to be in someone else's...